Friday, March 29, 2019

22A - Elevator Pitch No. 3




The feedback I received from the last post was to develop my script beforehand. This would allow me to keep my main points in check going forward to the filming stage. This meant that I would then have a more comprehensive and straightforward rhythm to my speech pattern.

I changed my speech style to reflect my personality more. This meant some more smiling and even a bit of joking around to truly feel comfortable when I went in to film the final stage of the video. That being said, I truly felt in my element in this recording thankfully. 
Posted by at

2 comments:

  1. EricRichardApril 1, 2019 at 7:12 PM

    Hey Patrick, good job on this. You seemed upfront and personal in your pitch, which I think will help you out selling this kind of service. I think it's a good idea as long as you can get UF's approval. I would bring a little more energy into the pitch, in order to really show your passion for the service. Besides that good job on the pitch and way to go looking out for the kids.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Gabriela CabanApril 1, 2019 at 7:39 PM

    Hi Patrick,

    Looking back to your last pitch, I can definitely see that you have taken all the feedback into consideration and applied it to this one. The beforehand-scripted technique was a smart move to do, because like you said, it would aid in keeping all the main points that you want to make in-check. I applaud you for the improvements and for being a good sport for constructive criticism!

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)